Sunday, August 26, 2012

Nifty Narratives

Here is a selection of some great narrative writing by Room 16 children. These stories are based on fusions of two different fairy tales.


Once upon a time there was a cottage, which Jack’s family lived in. One day Jack found some magic beans and he planted them in the garden. The beans grew and grew every day until there was a giant beanstalk. Jack climbed it until he got to the top and the beanstalk fell over but at the top was a beautiful castle. Cinderella lived in it. She wanted to go to the ball but she was too scared to jump down. So Jack jumped with her. Then they rushed to the ball and they lived happily ever after. By Sydney.

Once upon a time there was a little girl called Cinderella. She lived in a castle up on a cloud. Down on the ground Jack grew a beanstalk. He climbed up the beanstalk and he saw the cloud. Cinderella was up there. She was crying because the giant would not let her down. So the little boy Jack sang twinkle twinkle little star. The song made the giant go to sleep. Cinderella snuck down to Jack. Jack and Cinderella went to the ball. She never went back to the giant again and they lived happily ever after, By George.

Once upon a time there was a king and queen. The king and the queen got married. A wolf blew the castle down. Then the wolf helps the king and queen build the castle. They realize that the wolf was good and they become friends. By Kyle

Once upon a time there were three little pigs. They were very nasty, little and mischievous and their weakness was songs that made them sleep. These pigs were guarding a bridge. When you look to the north you can see a very big building. By the very big building is a stream and in the stream is a waka. When you look to the south you can see very old woods with fantails and tuis. But one day Goldilocks was taking a walk in the forest. Goldilocks was a very tall and mischievous little girl. She really, really wanted to go over the bridge. She walked over the bridge but, oh no, it’s the big, bad three little pigs. “AAAAAAA!!!!!!!”  she said. “This is it. I’m going to make it”, she said. This time she sang twinke, twinkle little star. All the pigs fell asleep so it worked. By the time she came back they were still snoring their little heads off. Goldilocks was full as from all that food from over the bridge. She leaves the pigs snoring their piggy heads off and she lives happily ever after. By Thomas.

Once upon a time there was a castle. In the castle there was a lovely princess called Cinderella who wore a little pink dress with a little red love heart on it. She lived in a biggish sized castle and the colour of the castle was pink. She loved her house because her favourite colour was pink and her house was pink of course. There was a moat around the castle. One day Cinderella hosted a ball in the Royal Palace. The three bears were invited. When the three bears got there the ball has started and they weren’t allowed to get in. But what haven’t I told you about the three bears? Well the little one is very cute and cuddly and soft and smooth. The second bear is brave but a little bit scared. Big bear is brave and just like an ordinary bear. This is how they solved their problem. They looked into the moat and saw the keys and found a pole and fished out the keys. They opened the door, dropped the keys back in the moat and did some wonderful dancing. They lived happily ever after. By Eva.

Once a boy called Jack lived in a house with his Mum. Their house is white and their roof is orange. Jack buys magic beans and his Mum throws the magic beans out the window. The next day a beanstalk grew. Jack climbed the beanstalk but he fell off because he stood on a thin branch and it broke and he hurt his leg. So he went to hospital. Cinderella came to visit him because they were already friends. Cinderella looked after Jack until he was better. Later they both climbed the beanstalk together. By Jacob.

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