BFG Writing

This week we have been learning to write character descriptions. Our aim was to put a picture in the reader's head by using adjectives and similes. Here are a few pieces of spectacular writing.

Do you think the BFG is smelly, ugly and mean? Well listen to what Roald Dahl wrote. Once there was a giant. He was the smallest giant but he even has to bend down to see in an upstairs window. Let's get on with the story. His ears were as big as a bunny's and his arms were as thick as a tree trunk. I can't believe his arms were as thick as that! Did you know that if you stick your head out of your window a giant might grab you. The BFG grabbed Sophie! By Lexi.

What do you think about a giant. Smelly and very ugly? Well if you don't know anything then listen to my story. Once upon a time a giant called the BFG lived with other giants that were nasty. But the BFG was different because he was nice. His name stands for the Big Friendly Giant. He is so CRAZY! He is still friendly. The arm of the BFG is as long as a tree trunk. The BFG is 4 times as tall as a person. Wow that is tall! It is very easy to upset him. He does have feelings. The ears of the BFG are easy for him to flip in and out. The ears are as big as a truck wheel. His toes are huge and they stick out of his sandals. His shirt is white with a jacket over top. By Lucy H.

I think that giants are old and ugly and smelly but the BFG is none of that. The BFG wears old, short pants. He is the friendliest giant.  He's littler than the other giants. He has big, fat ears. They are like a big water melon. He is awesome and he has a black waistcoat and he has a trumpet. He is nice. By Fintan.

Can you guess who's the friendliest giant? It's the BFG. He's got a black T-Shirt. He's the runt of the giants. He has ears that flap in and out. He's really crazy. By Dominic.

Do you know that other giants are evil? Not the BFG. He's friendly and has big round ears and huge white teeth and a big coat. He's nice and sensitive. He may be the nicest giant ever. As nice as a butterfly. By Logan.

Wow! I didn't know that there really are friendly giants like the BFG. But he is a runt. He is also very tall. His ears are as big as truck wheels and his arm is as long as a tree trunk. He is also very wrinkly. By Max.

What do you think about a friendly giant? Most people think giants are ugly, smelly, evil and gross. But the BFG means Big Friendly Giant. He is a nice giant. He has feelings and he is very tall but he is the runt. By Sydney.

The BFG is very crazy but friendly. He is the runt. He has long arms and he is thin. He has a black coat. He is a giant. He is very nice and very sensitive. His arms are as thick as a tree trunk. By Luke.

The BFG - wow I can't believe it but he is a bit crazy. His arm is as thick as a tree trunk. Because he is a giant he has giant ears. He is also very thin. By Jacob.

The BFG is really big. He wears green pants, a black jacket and he is really nice and he is friendly. His ears are as big as truck wheels. By George.